Sinking Feeling

Let's start off with the style.

You have improved considerably. This piece has a darker vibe to it then most, yet it still manages to hold a sense of normality as well. Granted, it isn't it's main emotional indicator, but it fits oddly well. It also shows the emotions of Twilight quite effectively, and overall, I love the style you used.

The focus of the piece, while a commonly used one, still holds true to it's base roots. Twilight is in a bad spot, and this piece shows this nicely.

All in all, I love it.

It has a nice style, it makes me feel what you presumably want me to feel, and it was made lovingly.